Episode #2 Mr. Squiggle Bottoms goes on vacation continued.....
At the GRAND sleepover they play games, watch tv, tell ghost stories and of course stay up late!! By the time they fall asleep it's midnight.
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In the morning Mr. Sqiggle Bottoms wakes up first, at 7:00am. Then he gets up and goes to make double fudge chocolate chip pancakes with whipp cream. "Mmmmm.........." he says "They'll sure enjoy this." After a while Jarardo, Camica, Saphire and Marco wake up. By then it was 8:00. "Mmmmm..............what's that smell?" Jarardo asked breathing in the warm chocolatey smell. "Yea!" said Camica "What is that AMAZING smell?!" "Why that my friends is the WONDERFUL double fudge chocolate chip pancakes with real whipped whipp cream on top!!" anounced Mr. Squiggle Bottoms. "Care to join me?" All of his friends yelled yea and ran to the table that was already set with their AMAZING pancakes. "WOA!!" said Marco "These ARE amazing!!" "What did I say?" said Mr. Squiggle Bottoms. "I said they were amazing...didn't I?" Mr. Squiggle Bottoms looked at his watch and announced, "start finishing up, we had better get a move on to the airport." So everyone finished up and started to wash the dishes, clean up the bed, brush their teeth, brush their fur and grab their suitcases, cause their off to San Fransisco.
TO BE CONTINUED..........
posted by Marlowe at 7:33 AM
2 Comments:
Mmmm..I can almost taste those delicious pancakes. I love the way you give details to a story. My favorite part is when they brush their teeth and fur. It was funny because I was expecting to read hair, but fur was accurate. Keep on writing. I can't wait to hear what happens next.
Thanx Mom,
I hope everyone can enjoy it as much as it sounds like you do. I'm now trying to start writing again on my blogs.
Hope you enjoy the rest of the episodes!!
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